I'm a bit of a grammar nazi so spelling and punctuation should be good. My computer lacks internet at the moment so there's likely to be some. I'm sure it's easier to spot when your not the one who writes it all.
An example of what I've done;
When Terra wakes up, she'll say to Locke, ''I'm still alive?''
Locke's reply, ''Yeah, the moogles got in the way.''
Kefka's new line instead of ''Ahem, there's sand in my boots.'' he asks for a handjob. I don't particularly want a lot of sex jokes but in this instance, the soldiers look like they're actually giving him one.
I figure each story segment will have it's own theme to make some sense. The main influence is taking advantage of the natural movements characters/NPC's make. Plus I changed a few graphics around so that might help too. Banon uses Umaro's sprite so the party could talk about a monkey at the Returner hideout instead of 'plans'.
Topic: FF6: Rewriting the story thoughts (Read 2765 times)