Eh?
The sentence is this..
"May be survivors inside."
The sentence doesn't make sense, regardless of how "may be" is combined or not.
The setence should read more like this...
"There may be survivors inside."
or
"Maybe there are survivors inside."
(Heck, I should've spelled it out for reference to remove all confusion.)
Anyways... some more pics..
I'm partial to merging "under" and "water" together:

That's not the name of the item you receive....

Rehash of spell check failure:


Man, these sentences are getting worse...

On a related thought, it would probably be a good idea (tm) to change the website addy displayed in this hack, unless there are referred to the current website...

I did recall one other thing... after the Ultros battle (see my movie).. there seems to be a strange "hang" that occurs.. but it's actually the game trying to give you the message that you got items from Ultros and his companion, but that fails for obvious visible reasons. You need to hit 'A' a few times to fix that. I'm not sure if that should be documented in the readme or if that tandem shouldn't drop anything...