Oooookay, here's what happened since last post:
-The Dornio Inn man is now drowning his sorrows. Living it up had the same intent so I didn't deal with this in the first pass, buuuut I made a judgement call here and this is better. These people are expecting the worst after all.
-I did however, keep the clear your conscience thing. The nun is to call someone to pray because the apocalypse is coming, and honestly as someone who comes from a huge church community being raised around end of the world calls I realize this has the same intent. I've heard both.
-After the prehistoric party, Ayla now says she drank too much Rock Crash. I had originally kept the eating part in first pass because she talks about both eating and drinking. After restoring Rock Crash though this is much more inconsistent.
-The future Lab locations are now Ruins. The DS version has these listed as "sites." Honestly though, since the english script and chapter name call them ruins I think these should be named such for consistency. This includes Doan, as his Lab mention was capitalized wrong anyway.
Later? Eh... Real Life has managed to creep in and I can only think of very minor things to tend to anymore on this branch (like... maybe Falcon Hit to Falcon Cut? Make Zamato a thing in all patches? That kind of small). Any updates will surely take a long while otherwise.