Did you hack the DTE table or force that font into theirs? It's much easier when you hack the table, I got every letter to fit except for the ones that were too wide. Switched my hack over to FF2us 1.1 so I have no plans to actually use that font anymore though.
Also, shadowing a font with gray like that causes it to bleed together on an actual TV, your letters will probably look a little distorted (I actually had a hard time playing RPGe's FF5 translation on my SNES for this reason, and had to hack the font to remove the shadow). It probably won't be so bad with that font, but when you've got bold letters with shadow that fills pretty much all of the space between them, it all just bleeds into a barely-readable blob.
Edit: Damn you dyslexia!

And since I'm editing this, I forgot to mention that your hack looks great so far.