Interesting to hear that FuSoYa apparently knows everything that KluYa had been up to. I am still leery what "teaching magic to the people" means, even though the DS version does say that plainly when originally it was Minwu who allowed magic to be taught.
I don't recall that being in my script? I looked in the Fusoya introduction speech and there's nothing there.
All-Mage? That's an odd title. Why not go with the Lunar that the original game did, even Lunarian would have fit.
no, actually, we're only allowed seven letters for class titles, or else Rydia would've been a Summoner and DKnight Cecil would've been, more eloquently, a D.Knight. "Lunaria" is the closest that'd fit. I picked All-Mage because by FF standards, he's actually a Sage, and Tellah's closer to a Red Mage. But for story purposes, Tellah's a Sage. I was wondering what sounded stronger than "Sage" and All-Mage came to mind, so there we have it.
"Golbez: Am I... free of the... hatred?" I always preferred the original "Why was I filled with such hatred?"
I wrote it like that because I wanted to imply that, like Kain, Golbez's true mind was lucid the entire time he was being controlled by Zemus.
"Cecil: Edge, hit the crystal." "hit" seems... oddly inappropriate when "use" would suffice.
I always assumed that one of them touched the crystal to head between Earth and the Moon.
Umm... when I tried to throw something at Zeromus, the game said "Halting Aria" and cancelled it. Interesting...? I guess I never knew that something like that was in place?
This is due to how Edward's songs were changed. Halting Aria is one of his songs. I assume that the message, before, was "Ineffective." and it was shared between Sing and this Zeromus battle. I could always remove Halting Aria and change the message back to "Ineffective."
The Star Trek quote from FuSoYa seems a bit... silly.
I know, I know--I inserted another pop culture reference when I don't even follow the thing it's from in the first place, but I couldn't not do it.
"Seneschal: And further His Highness..." Shouldn't that be "Your Highness? Since he is referring to Edge and not... Yang or Cecil.
I can fix that.
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Thanks again for all the praise, Grimoire LD! I'll start on the final changes, and then, barring any unforeseen issues (Like with Warp...) that'll be it 'til v2.00.

So maybe I can't edit Sing out just yet. I could change the message back to "Ineffective." but I'm not removing Halting Aria's effect on Edward's songs until I can fiddle with the percentage of what song is cast when.